THE CONTINUOUS MUSE:
A DISSERTATION ON THE CONTINUOUS
CREATIVE PROCESS
AND THE LITERARY MIND

Introduction

The great writers were never satisfied. Such is the thesis of this dissertation. Hemingway re-wrote the last chapter to A Farewell to Arms over 60 times but still was not satisfied with the results. Robert Browning set about revising all of his poetry at the age of 70. Great writers continue crafting and re-crafting their work beyond publication. One could argue no work is ever complete, for the great writers never declare them so.

To illustrate, I submit here a few overlooked journal entries of three (3) of the most famous quotes in literature: one from John Donne's Meditation XVII, one from Herman Melville's Moby Dick, and one from Charles Dicken's A Tale of Two Cities. All were written during each author's later years. Each was failing in health. Each died the day of the last entry. The words are worth studying not only for their literary worth, but for our better understanding of the author's state of mind throughout the course of these revisions.

Image courtesy LuminariumFirst of all, I must admit that I don't much care for John's poems. But he's important to know--after all, he was the leader, so to speak, of the metaphysical school of poetry and by all accounts, a nice guy. He was described as a very charming and companionable person, even if he was raised Catholic. Though he attended the very prestigious universities of Oxford and Cambridge, he was unable to take a degree either place because his family objected on religious grounds to the oath of allegiance all graduates had to take. Undaunted, John began to study law in 1592, in hopes of landing a state job, or perhaps even a court position. He also frittered away some of his time messing about with some poetry.

 

Source: Incompetech's British Author Series , Laura MacLeod. Donne image courtesy of The Luminarium.
 

". . . and therefore never send to know for whom the bell tolls; it tolls for thee."

--Meditation XVII, John Donne

 
  • 1 January 1631 - Drank raw eggs this morning. The line still haunts me. The word still haunts me: "Bells, bells, bells! For thee!" Improvement.
  • 31 January 1631 - Gave sermon again!  Impromptu, screaming out of bedroom window: "Bells, bells! Why do you ask? For thee!" Made a frightful face. They scattered like fleas.
  • 7 February 1631 - No one has visited or spied into window for a week. Declared to the cold midnight winter: "Ask about the bells! For thee!" (They are hiding out there.)
  • 14 February 1631 - "If you don't know for whom the bells toll, I'll tell thee: For thee!!!" Told that to the Pope himself while he sat on my bed casting out demons. Said it right to his face! Dare he ask me to censor my own sermon? Scared the children! Good!
  • 26 February 1631 - Fascinated with exclamations of late. Dreamed a man read one of my poems in a horrible Welsh accent. . . bombastic . . . very frightful dream, hearing his agonizing drones. If this dream is a portent, then I must revise the sermon: "Thee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
  • 1 March 1631 - So, I said, "theetheetheetheetheetheetheethee?!" The question mark confused them all. All of them ran like rats into the night. Could not catch them.
  • 2 March 1631 - New word: forthee, forthee, forthee

  • 3 March 1631 - Midnight. Meditation: "What's a guy gotta do to get some bells?"
  • 3 March 1631 - 4 a.m. Cold. Cannot sleep. "Can I get some bells over here?"

After having read a total of five books by Melville . . . I strongly support the fact that Herman Melville is the greatest American author. Melville seems to have a mix of complexity and entertainment which is unmatched by all other Americans. When reading Melville, you not only get to hear an enticing tale of an adventure, but you also become acquainted with so much more. It is impossible for you to grasp and understand every aspect of Moby Dick; the book is just far too complex. When asked about Moby Dick's vast content, Melville declared, "Give me a condor's quill! Give me Vesuvius's crater for an ink stand...To produce a mighty book you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on a flea, though many there be that have tried it," you think, "Oh joy!" just what I need, an author who loves writing neverending novels (obviously the Russians liked Melville). However, through Melville's labyrinth of pages and sentences, I was able to detect a fascinating complexity and genius in his work. It was indeed the complexity and fascination of Moby Dick, the book that provoked me to read other works by Melville, that ultimately led me to pick Herman Melville as the man of my attention.

 

Source: Herman Melville: America's Diogenes , Manus J. Donahue III

"Call me Ishmael."

--Moby Dick, Herman Melville


  • 20 September 1891 - What was I thinking--Call me, Ishmael? "I am Ishmael." Perfect!
  • 21 September 1891 - Revised William Budd. Prompted further revision of Moby Richard: "I am called Ishamael." More perfect!
  • 22 September 1891 - Most perfect! "My parents named me Ishmael. You can call me that, too." Friendly, carefree, congenial.
  • 23 September 1891 - Congenial tone: "People, call me Ishmael." Must rewrite all of MR.
  • 24 September 1891 - "Some people call me Ishy."
  • 25 September 1891 - "Call me Ishy." Children's version?
  • 26 September 1891 - Yes! Will re-write MR for children. "I am Smishy."
  • 27 September 1891 - Watched as dinner was prepared. Counted one fish, two fish, etc. Revision for children's book titled, Fisherman Goes a-Fishin': "Ishy Smishy."
  • 28 September 1891 - Nat stopped by. Insisted I see the physician regarding my physical and mental health. Said I was insane. I told him to have "Faith." Waited a long while to tell him that. We scuffled. Grabbed his arm, twisted it behind his back, and forced him to shout: "Gimme an "I"! Gimme an "S"! . . .until he had spelled I - S - H - Y. Feeling very exhausted from the exertion. "Ishy Smishy was a fishy . . ."

Dickens stands on a peak with the greatest English writers. The more we study him the richer and deeper does he appear. He tells his stories well. His opening paragraphs have the power to intrigue us, engaging our attention from the first sentence and holding it to the end. He creates on a grand scale, covering a huge range of characters and incidents. Above all, he has to the highest degree possible that essential quality of the artist-creative imagination. . . . Let no one here speak a word of skepticism as to the reality of Sairy Gamp, Mr. Barkis, Fagin, Bumble the Beadle, the Marchioness, Uriah Heep, Scrooge, and above all, Mrs. Arris. For the words you speak of Mrs. Arris, & quotlambs will not forgive nor worms forget.

 

Source: Given by Dr. Earl M. McWilliams on February 10, 1996 before the Philadelphia Branch of the Dickens Fellowship in commemoration of the birth of Charles Dickens.


"It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done;

it is a far, far better rest that I go to than I have ever known."

--A Tale of Two Cities, Charles Dickens

 

  • 9 March 1870 - Set about to revise that damned last line! Revision: "It's better than other things I could do; better than other places I've been." There!
  • 1 April 1870 - Received note from publisher. Revise last line. Again! Sent: "It's far better than that; better I go there!" That ought to quiet him.
  • 26 April 1870 - No further publications until line satisfies publisher. Well! "Far better that I do this, than that other thing I could have done."
  • 9 May 1870 - Will not wait for rejection. Sent out today: "Far, far, FAR better I do this; far, far, FAR not that."
  • 15 May 1870 - Publisher sent the following suggestion: "I haven't slept like this in years!" Gave it consideration. Done! Need a holiday. Going to America, perhaps.
  • 2 June 1870 - Back from holiday. Fresh outlook. Far, far...etc. Too wordy. "What's done is done." Much shorter, but will fit on page very well says publisher.
  • 6 June 1870 - Nice lady visited me today. Inspired another revision. "That's so much better. . . far, far, far better. . .oh yeah!"
  • 9 June 1870 - Very fitful day. Coughing and cursing. Yet, I am filled with elation. The last line is too glum. Should read: "Today-day-day-day...I am-am the luckiest-st-st man-n in the world!"
  • 9 June 1870 - Late. Hacking and cursing. Final revision: "I'd rather be a hammer than a nail; I'd rather be in Cleveland." The hammer and nail part will someday make for a nice cliché. Don't know what a Cleveland is. But it soothes me. Coughing and hacking. No more revisions!
 

Conclusion

Clearly, three important and salient points emerge from this presentation:

A) No great work has ever been completed;

B) No great author ever stopped writing;

C) Literary influence on contemporary culture is the benchmark of all great literary works.


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